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Tone Snowflake
Some Thoughts, Please?
Well, I’ve always wanted to be part of music in some way.. and I’m not doing very well with the instrument playing.. so maybe I could write songs for my friends who are better.. for now I’ve written a couple of lame lyrics.. but I was wondering if I’d even have a chance. please rate this and honestly, tell me what you think. Thanks. [btw; Its not done, as you can see..]
Alone you sit at home, Sometimes I worry about you.
Pick up the phone; just to listen to the dial tone
I know you won’t answer, so what is my effort to you?
And the rain just falls slower when you’re around
My lips numb when I say your name
You’re heartstopping for me
And I’m just a careless breath for you
The world could pass me by without my eyes ever leaving you
But what you don’t know, can only hurt me.
Snowflakes are on fire when you stand next to me,
My ears will beg to hear another of your words,
Just once, say my name with that gorgeous smile.
Err, yeah.. opinions, please?
Hope your friends like it. I have no problems with it. Go do your thing and spread the luuuuvvv!
Peace!!!
